you and i are disappearing

[gollum]

slightly melodramatic, not really sure why. the [ ]s are there to indicate indentations...it's the only way i could get 'em to work on hostboard. anywho...

you and i are disappearing

you and i are disappearing.
i am crashing into the shore,
hurled by the waves,
disintegrating with every cycle
[ ]of ebb
[ ][ ]and flow.
you are sinking into the foam.
every wave pulls me a little bit farther
away from you. i always
thought that maybe we could
disappear together,
and i think i've caught hold of your hair

but my reaching hand
pulls in only seaweed
as you sink,
as you drown.
as i crash.

you and i are disappearing.

[This message has been edited by gollum (edited October 17, 2000).]

[Oz]

i like the seperation and i really like the fact that you indented those two lines. i love things like that! keep up the good work!

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